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the perspective is off but i can tell that is intentional. it actually adds to the piece by making the viewer feel disoriented.
Colors are everything in this one.
the buildings are an aura in my opinion, they loose all connections with the cement as you look higher. it's stunning really.
there is a little bit of an issue with where the shadows should go, mainly under her left front leg. i might be wrong but i feel that shadow should be on the other side because of the glow from the train.
keep it up
i give it a 5
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Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for your wonderful critique!

Yeah, I agree, the shadows are a bit strange. I really need to work on lighting, something I have issues with, especially in rainy night scenes it seems. Though, I was also trying to accommodate the requester's idea that Vinyl should be bright with a kind of aura.

The buildings are meant to represent a corrupted corporation, so I guess that works!
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